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My old friend :) Hi Hi all again) as your business?) Today was a nice summer's day, it was a bit overcast and rain Shel:( but it was not terrible, the rain has passed quickly. Today I met and talked with his girlfriend, her name is Diana. We are with her classmate and best friend. From the very first class, we were inseparable. But after completing the fifth grade, we become divided, communicate with different people, and each of us had a different best friends. For a while we stopped communicating altogether. We communicated only in English and French school are subjects on which we sat together. So, today at 12:00 we met with her and walked. we talked about summer, about a school that does not want to come back, so we chatted about everything. Our communication was restored, she is still my best friend, but not so close as Nastia:)

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My Old Friend :)

Hi. Hi all, again. )  How is it going? [1] 
Today was a nice summer's day.  It was a bit overcast, and it rained.  (But it wasn't terrible; the rain has passed quickly.
Today I met and talked with a [2] girlfriend.  Her name is Diana.  She and I are [3] classmates and best friends. From the very first class, we were inseparable. But after completing the fifth grade, we became separated, socialized with different people, and each of us had a different best friend. For a while we stopped communicating altogether. We communicated only in English and French, subjects we studied together in school.  So, today at 12:00 I met with her [3].  We walked. we talked about summer, and about a school that does not want to come back. [4]  In fact, we chatted about everything. Our communication was restored, and she is still my best friend, but not so close as Nastia.  :)

 

[1]  I think you wanted to translate "Как дела?"  If so, "How is it going" is a good way.

[2]  I don't know why you wrote "his" (его).  I think you meant you met with a girlfriend of yours.  

[3]  In Russian, you have a construction "мы с (кем-нибудь).  We don't use that construction in English.

[4]  I don't understand the phrase, "about a school that does not want to come back."  If you write it in English in other words, or write it in Russian, I'll try to help.

 

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