hi my friend you can see your mistake as below: I like night I like night very much.Because it's silent in the night.Evrythinq has a rest.And at the same time.silence gives me a special power to think.When I am thinkmg(the outside world is disappeared for me.And I can create whatever I want in my thinking kingdom.Sometfmes.when I am sleeping.Suddenly,I catch inspiration about some incredible things,! get up at once then open my laptop to type.(I think maybe it is better to write in a notebook or a thik book, but my handwriting is so poor J remember my handwrting has never been prasied by any my Chinese teacher,) And in the mean time J always make West Lake lotus root powder with warm water for myfelf.It is so pleasing for me.I do like night.

I think there must be some grammar mistakes.But I dont know where is the mistake.