A boy who wants to be a politician.
What intrigued me today was a student who said he wanted to be a politician! He usually belongs mid-low level on almost all subjects except history and social studies. He concentrates only for the subjects. In this point he is way brilliant.
I said YES you sould! Then he seemed so excited about his future and I was so happy to see the one who is able to have a big dream in his young stage.
I hope his performance increses step by srep. Cant wait to see his improvement.
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A boy who wants to be a politician.
What intrigued me today was a student who said he wanted to be a politician! He usually belongs to the mid-low level on almost all subjects except history and social studies. He concentrates only for (use "on") these (subjects is plural so the article needs to be plural) subjects. In this point ("these classes" again the subject is plural.) he is way ("very" using way isnt incorrect, and is colloquial, but in writing it is strange to say this) brilliant.
I said "YES you sould!" Then he seemed so excited about his future and I was so happy to see the someone (articles are not needed when using "someone" or "something") who is able to have a big dream in at his young stage (use "age").
I hope his performance increses step by srep step. Can't wait to see his improvement.
Your english is very good.
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I said "YES! You should!".
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Just adding to Ian's excellent correction above. A simple little spelling mistake ;)
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