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A Forgotten Trip We paid a visit to HuanHuaXi Park,yesterday .The weather was good,it not great hot ,on the contrary,it is cool.The landscapes of the park are very beautiful,which attracted us most,so we took many photos .There is a small lake in the park ,which is surrounded by trees and grass,i told my friends that i want to have a house that is located in beautiful surroundings,but he played a joke about me ,he told me that my dream would be come ture if i buy a tent ,and then i can live there.What impressed me most is WanZuLin,where planted plenty of bamboo.You will feel a peaceful and quiet atmosphere,when you devote yourself to the bamboo.Yesterday was a great day ,because i had a good time .

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A Forgotten Trip

We paid a visit to HuanHuaXi Park,yesterday .The weather was good,it was not very hot ,on the contrary/instead,it was cold.The landscapes of the park are very beautiful,which attracted us the most,so we took many photos .There is a small lake in the park ,which is surrounded by trees and grass,I told my friends that I want to have a house that is located in beautiful surroundings,but on of my friend made a joke of me ,he told me that my dream would come true,if I buy a tent ,and then start living there.What impressed me most is WanZuLin,where plenty of Bamboo trees are planted.You feels a peaceful and quiet atmosphere,when you devote yourself to the bamboo.Yesterday was a great day ,because I really had good time.

 

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A Forgotten Trip

We paid a visit to HuanHuaXi Park,yesterday .The weather was good.  it was not very hot--on the contrary--it was cool.The landscapes of the park are very beautiful which attracted us most so we took many photos .There is a small lake in the park which is surrounded by trees and grass.  i told my friends that i want to have a house that is located in beautiful surroundings,but one friend played a joke about me.  he told me that my dream would be come true if i buy a tent and then live there.What impressed me most is WanZuLin where plenty of bamboo is planted.  You can feel the peaceful and quiet atmosphere when you devote yourself to the bamboo.Yesterday was a great day because i had a good time .

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