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Delicious dinner We all know that the Wanzhou-roast fish is delicious,We had tasted it yesterday in the restaurant. Before the cooking,I asked for the chef that I like peppery food.Yes,I like hot food,I come form Hunan. As everyone knows that girl form Hunan is called the spice girl. As soon as the roast fish was served,it really knocked me down. There so many so many red peppers in the tray.(you can see it at the picture) It was not necessary to say angmore,we dug into it hungrily. At last,I hurt my tougue with red peppers.

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Delicious dinner

We all know that the Wanzhou-roast fish is delicious. We had tasted it yesterday in the restaurant.
Before the cooking When ordering, I asked the waiter to tell for the chef that I like peppery spicy food. Yes, I like hot food because I come from Hunan.
As Everyone knows that girls from Hunan is are called "the spice girls".
As soon as the roast fish was served, it really knocked me down.
There so many so many red peppers in the tray (you can see it at the picture)
It was not necessary to say anymore, we dug into it hungrily (greedily is better).
At last,I hurt my tougue the end my tongue was burning with red peppers.

 

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