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Crazy today Today is cold and sunny, unusual weather for my city, St. Petersburg. People in the street smile, and i like it! Today is Friday, and i really would to say smth like "Thanks God, it's Friday". But it's will be really hard day, you know... First of all, i'll go to my work now, where i must do a lot of work very quickly. Then i have a korean lesson (7 p.m. - 9 p.m.). Besides, i have to do my homework before to go to this lesson and learn about 30 new words. At home after study i have to do my English homework (for English Saturday's lesson), and cook a cake for my friend, because she's birthday is tomorrow and i promised to do it. I'm in panic, because my mixer is broken! But i'll cook it whatever happens, i just need positive mood :)) Awww, i really hope, i'll go to bed before it's will be dawning! *_* Sometimes i think that all my life just crazy like this day... ___ I guess, i made many mistakes, so please, help me to correct it :) And have a nice day! I send you my positive energy ^_^

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Crazy today

Today is cold and sunny, unusual weather for my city, St. Petersburg. People in the street smile, and i like it!

Today is Friday, and i really would to say smth like "Thanks God (1), it's Friday". But (2) it's will be really hard day, you know... First of all, i'll go to my work now (3), where i must do a lot of work very quickly. Then i have a korean (4) lesson (7 p.m. - 9 p.m.). Besides, i have to do my homework before to go to this lesson and learn about 30 new words. At home after study i have to do my English homework (for English Saturday's lesson (5)), and cook (6) a cake for my friend, because she's birthday is tomorrow (7) and i promised to do it. I'm in panic (8), because my mixer is broken! But i'll cook it whatever happens, i just need positive mood (9) :)) (10)

Awww, i really hope, i'll go to bed before it's will be dawning (11)! *_* (12)
Sometimes i think that all my life just crazy like this day..(13).
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I guess, i made many mistakes(14), so please, help me to correct it (15) :) And have a nice day! I send you my positive energy ^_^  (16) (17)



FIRST remember when using 'I' (= 'me') always use a capital Letter I

(1)  Thank God  (no 's')
(2)   it will be (no 's') a really hard day (insert 'a')
(3)   omit 'now'  
(4)   Korean (countries and nationalities have capital letters)
(5)   for my English lesson on Saturday OR for Saturday's English lesson
(6)   bake  'cook' is for meals, 'bake'  is for cakes break biscuits etc
(7)   It's her birthday tomorrow
(8)   I'm in a panic (insert 'a')
(9)   I just need to get into the mood .(some people just say 'get in the mood' OR 'get myself in the mood i.e. there's an effort expressed in this phrase)
(10)  Nice smile!
(11)  I'll get to bed before dawn
(12)  You look terrible!
(13)  I think my whole life will be crazy like today / this day
(14)  See if you can find my 'notebook' entry on 'masses' Try http://www.italki.com/notebook/entry/32332.htm
(15)  correct them OR this
(16)  You're looking better already!
(17) Thanks for your reply to my notebook thing about  Самый узкий дом  :D
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Crazy today

Today is cold and sunny, unusual weather for my city, St. Petersburg. People in the street smile, and i like it!

Today is Friday, and i really would really like to say smth like "Thanks God, it's Friday". But it's it will be a really hard day, you know... First of all, i'll go to my work now, where i must do a lot of work very quickly. Then i have a korean lesson (7 p.m. - 9 p.m.). Besides, i have to do my homework before to go going to this lesson and learn about 30 new words. At home after study i have to do my English homework (for English Saturday's lesson), and cook a cake for my friend, because she's her birthday is tomorrow and i promised to do it. I'm in panic, because my mixer is broken! But i'll cook it whatever happens anyway, i just need positive mood :))

Awww, i really hope, i'll go to bed before it's will be  it is dawning! *_*
Sometimes i think that all my life just crazy like this day...
___
I guess, i made many mistakes, so please, help me to correct it :) And have a nice day! I send you my positive energy ^_^
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Crazy today

Today is cold and sunny, unusual weather for my city, St. Petersburg. People in the street smile, and i like it!

Today is Friday, and i really would to say smth like "Thanks God, it's Friday". But it's will be really hard day, you know... First of all, i'll go to my work now, where i must do a lot of work very quickly. Then i have a korean lesson (7 p.m. - 9 p.m.). Besides, i have to do my homework before to go to this lesson and learn about 30 new words. At home after study i have to do my English homework (for English Saturday's lesson), and cook a cake for my friend, because she's birthday is tomorrow and i promised to do it. I'm in panic, because my mixer is broken! But i'll cook it whatever happens, i just need positive mood :))

Awww, i really hope, i'll go to bed before it's will be dawning! *_*
Sometimes i think that all my life just crazy like this day...
___
I guess, i made many mistakes, so please, help me to correct it :) And have a nice day! I send you my positive energy ^_^
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Maxi, yeah, maybe sometimes :)
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Maybe every is crazy!

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