My holidays

Hi! Today is the first day of my holiday. I'm bored, so I asked myself what I can do. This afternoon, I'm gonna go shopping because I need a new jacket. Later, I've planned to go to Atlantic Ocean (west France). Anyway, I want to use this summer to improve my English and my German. Then, maybe I'll travel to some countries and I'll visit beautiful cities.

**"I've planned" implies that it will happen in the future, making "Later" redundant.

**The second "my" is unnecessary because it is your English and German.

**The second "I'll" is unnecessary because you are planning to do both.

My holidays

Hi! Today is my first day of holidays. I'm bored, so I asked myself what I can do...This afternoon, I'm gonna go shopping because I need a new jacket. Later, I've planned to go to Atlantic Ocean (west France). Anyway, I want to use this summer to improve my English and my German. Then maybe I'll travel in some countries and I'll visite visit some beautiful cities.

**Don't forget to capitalize proper nouns, such as the names of places and languages.

My holidays

Hi! Today is my first day of holidays. I'm bored, so I asked myself what I can do...This afternoon, I'm gonna go shopping because I need a new jacket. Later, I've planned to go to Atlantic Ocean (west France). Anyway, I want to use this summer to improve my English and my German. Then maybe I'll travel in some countries and I'll visite visit some beautiful cities.

**Don't forget to capitalize proper nouns, such as the names of places and languages.

My holidays

Hi! Today is my the first day of my holidays. I'm bored. I asked myself what I can could do...This afternoon, I'm gonna going to go shopping because I need a new jacket. Later, I've planned to go to the aAtlantic ocean (west France). Anyway, I want to use this summer to improve my English and my German. Then maybe I'll travel in to some countries and I'll visite beautiful cities.