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Reality
I was walking walked for two hours in the this afternoon, thinking about my future.
I realized that this city where I am living now is friendly, but I feel so sad.
At work, I am working following some rules that I don't agree with, for example:
I have to work one day in the night, another day in the afternoon, other day in the morning.
I haven't do been taking courses (swimming, languages, dancing ) because of my job. I don't have the same period of free time to pursue my interests doing my activities.
I miss my friends, my the places where I used to be go. My life is nonsense (?)
I 've decided to return to Bogotá without a house, and without my mother, but with the hope to of beginning begin to do the things that I like, to beginning to live again, sharing to with others my knowledge and helping to them.
I apologize: My brain was very lazy and I could not write more.
Thanks to Italki's comunity for the corrections.
Hi Ana Maria. Good work. Please let me know if these corrections are not what you had in mind when writing your note.
Reality
I was walking for two hours in the afternoon, thinking about my future.
I realized that this city where I am living now is friendly, but I feel so sad.
I am working, following some rules that I don't agree with, for example:
I have to work one day at night, another day in the afternoon, and all other days in the morning.
I haven't done any courses (swimming, language, dancing), because the times conflict with my job. I don't have eough free time for doing these other activities.
I miss my friends and the places where I used to be, my life has changed.
I've decided to return to Bogotá, without a house and without my mother, but with the hope to begin to doing the things that I like, beginning to live again, sharing my knowledge with others and helping to them.
I apologize, my brain is very tired and I cannot write more.
Thank you, italki community, for any corrections!
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