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Hot day and lazy me This term is coming to the end, the majority of my courses was done,so today i am off agian. What shall i do such a hot day! Because of this,i suggest my roommates to play an especially popular game called三国杀 online.The game has 4 roles,they are called Lord(1)、Loyal Minister(2)、Provocateur(1) and Ubaxaha Hvlha(4).Lord and Loyal Minister are a team,if they killed all Ubaxaha Hvlhas,they win.As long as Lord dies,Ubaxaha Hvlha win.but if Provocateur want to win,all people should be killed except he and Lord,and he kills Lord.Of course,Provocateur is the most challenging role,it hardly win. there is barely time to enjoy ourselves.We really love the game.I have been about 1 year not play online game,as i am always addicted to online game,I was such absorbed in Daguai upgrade and skipped classes constantly before.But now i think i am under control.Ok,i go to play the game.haha, just kidding!

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Hot day and lazy me ------------> A Hot Lazy Day

This The term is about coming to the end thus the majority of my courses was are done. Ergo,  so I am free today! I am off agian. What shall I do on such a hot day? Because of this, Due to heat, I suggest asked my roommates to stay indoors and play a especially popular game --"三国杀 online". The game has 4 roles characters: they the are called Lord(1)、Loyal Minister(2)、Provocateur(1) and Ubaxaha Hvlha(4). Lord and Loyal Minister are a team,if they killed all Ubaxaha Hvlhas,they win. As long as Once the Lord dies the Ubaxaha Hvlha wins. but if For the Provocateur wants to win, all people should be killed except the and Lord and he kills Lord.Of course. The Provocateur is the most challenging role because it hardly wins.

there is We love the game so much but barely had time to enjoy it ourselves. We really love the game. It's have been about 1   a year since not I played an online game. as I was am always addicted to online games it. I was such absorbed in Daguai upgrade and skipped classes constantly before. But now, I think I am under can control it. Ok, I'm going to play again! the game.haha, just kidding!

*My correction might still have errors. I'm confused with the rules of the game but I tried my best.
*I also edited the title: A Hot Lazy Day!
  You did a good job! Just remember that it's important to have smooth flow of idea in a paragraph ^^

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