My fFirst nNotebook in English

Hi everybody !

My name is Benjamin,. I'm French, I am twenty-three years old. I'm a a 23 year-old Frenchman, who is a fourth year student at University of Economics and Management at Nancy, a fairly large city in Eastern France.

Firstly First, I came here in order to improve my English skills, but I have only practiced the Macedonian (a beautiful language, great people, an excellent food, and so on). I think I'm scared of speaking English because when I was young, I was very bad in English at it in school. Currently, I am trying to change it improve and I will succeed!

Greetings !

FEEDBACK

-Good entry. You have some complex structures and some very nice descriptive sentences. You're struggling with punctuation and phrasing a bit, but the meaning is clear.

NOTICE

- The first letter of every content word (noun, adj. verb.) in a title is capitalized.

- FirstLY, SecondLY (These transitions sound too formal and unnatural. They are not commonly used by native speakers).

- Don't use the definite article THE with languages.

- Place question marks and exclamation points immediately after the last letter of the sentence. Do not skip a space like in French.

My first notebook in English

Hi everybody !

My name is Benjamin, I'm French, I am twenty-three years old. I'm a fourth year student at University of Economics and Management at Nancy, a fairly large city in Eastern France.

Firstly I came here in order to improve my English skills, but I have only practiced the Macedonian (a beautiful language, great people, an excellent food, and so on). I think I'm scared of speaking English because when I was young, I was very bad in English at school. Currently I am trying to change it and I will succeed !

Greetings !

You sound natural! I wouldn't know that English wasn't your first language by reading this.