something exprience

This afternoon my friend and i talked for a long time, then we went to eat. We looked around to see some people are were drinking beer. so we want ordered two bottles of beer. I can't belive it!  I drank a bottle of beer. Till then i had never ever had a drink. I suddenly felt that human potential was unlimited.

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something exprience

This afternoon my friend and i talked for a long time.then we went to eat,Around to see some people are drinking beer.so we want two bottle of beer,i can't belive .i drank a bottle of beer.i had never ever drink. i suddenly felt that human potential was unlimited.

Hello, Lemon. Yes, I occasionally, have the same feeling but best not to drink too many. I thought you could rename your article. I have offered a few amendments to improve the English. 'I', in English, is always written with a capital letter.

Something (something) Newly Experienced (exprience)

This afternoon, my friend and I (i) talked for a long time, before (then we went) going out to eat, All around, (Around to see some) we saw people were (are) drinking beer, so we bought (want) two bottles (of beer). I (i) can't believe (belive) I drank a bottle of beer. I (i) had never ever drunk (drink) beer before. I (i) suddenly felt that my human potential was unlimited.