My Home Village
Everyone has his unique hometown/home village,a place never same as another.
My home village is a beautiful small village located at the foot of grand mountains in Shandong Province in North China.On the front are hilly land and mountains behind,a reservoir lays between the village and the mountains.A clear small river originates from the moutains and flows alongside the village.There are many small fishes,shrimps, crabs,mussels and other aquatic animals in the river.In the summer evening,frog sound is deafening,the sky studded with twinkling stars,so beauty let me lifelong unforgettable.
I love my home village.
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My Home Village
Everyone has his unique hometown/home village,a place that's never the same as another.
My home village is a beautiful small village located at the foot of the grand mountains in Shandong Province in North China. On the In front, there are hills and mountains. Behind,a reservoir lays between the village and the mountains. A clear small river originates from the moutains and flows alongside the village.There are many small fish,shrimp, crabs,mussels and other aquatic animals in the river.In the summer evening, the sound of frogs sound is deafening,the sky is studded with twinkling stars, so much beauty that I will remember for a lifetime, unforgettable.
I love my home village.
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the person's correct below pretty much corrected it the way i would have corrected it. my only other suggestion is the use of deafening; that word has somewhat of a negative connotation (it is similar in general meaning to saying 家的外面很吵). I would say "you can hear the sound of frogs", "the sound of frogs is in the air" (a somewhat colloquial way of saying "the sound of frogs can be heard") , etc. Otherwise good job!
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