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Corrections please! The Project Justification includes the reasons that induced me to carry out this quasi-experimental Research. The existing problem is posed and it manifests the Mexican Primary School Descontextualization of Curricular Model 2011, as a primary cause of the problem in the field of educational practice in regard to the teaching of programmatic content. I justify the reason for choosing Mathematics Subject and specifically the teaching methodology for each programmatic contents of Plan 2011, latest version ( blocks III and IV) to the actual Sixth Grade Primary Education. Furthermore I expose the goals to be achieved with the contextualization Curriculum Model mentioned. The Theoretical Framework describes the essential conceptualization with regard to teach contents that are selected: the Universal Law of Learning, planning processes; Learning, Teaching and Assessment, involved in Educational Fact. The eight applicable Methodological Approaches to each of the eight Math Program Content for Sixth Grade Primary Education Curriculum 2011, include: The Study Goal; Didactic Competence and the product that demonstrates its achievement; the student’s previous knowledge and experience; suggested Motivation; Educational Project and Methodological Sequence. The conclusions drawn from this job, also contain a bibliographical reference that I hope will be useful and helpful for teacher to improve their teaching techniques for the benefit of their students.

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Let me just say that this writing is hard to understand because you use technical terms and rather difficult sentence construction.  So. we say it has a high fog factor, a nice way to say it is not very clear and difficult to understand.  Take "essential conceptualization" for example.  Couldn't you just say the main ideas or the basic approach?  Try rewriting this so the ordinary person can understand it.  Now, that is a challenge.

 

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The Project Justification includes the reasons that induced me to carry out this quasi-experimental Research. The existing problem is posed and it manifests the Mexican Primary School Descontextualization of Curricular Model 2011, as a primary cause of the problem in the field of educational practice in regard to the teaching of programmatic content.
I justify the reason for choosing Mathematics Subject and specifically the teaching methodology for each programmatic contents of Plan 2011, latest version ( blocks III and IV) to the actual Sixth Grade Primary Education.
Furthermore I expose the goals to be achieved with the contextualization Curriculum Model mentioned.
The Theoretical Framework describes the essential conceptualization with regard to teach contents that are selected: the Universal Law of Learning, planning processes; Learning, Teaching and Assessment, involved in Educational Fact.
The eight applicable Methodological Approaches to each of the eight Math Program Content for Sixth Grade Primary Education Curriculum 2011, include: The Study Goal; Didactic Competence and the product that demonstrates its achievement; the student’s previous knowledge and experience; suggested Motivation; Educational Project and Methodological Sequence.
The conclusions drawn from this job, also contain a bibliographical reference that I hope will be useful and helpful for teacher to improve their teaching techniques for the benefit of their students.

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The Project Justification includes the reasons that convinced me to carry out this quasi-experimental Research. The existing problem is posed and states that the Mexican Primary School Descontextualization of Curricular Model 2011, is the primary cause of the problem in the field of educational practice in regard to the teaching of programmatic content.
I justify the reason for choosing Mathematics Subject and specifically the teaching methodology for each programmatic contents of Plan 2011, latest version ( blocks III and IV) to the actual Sixth Grade Primary Education.
Furthermore I describe the goals to be achieved with the contextualization Curriculum Model mentioned.
The Theoretical Framework describes the essential conceptualization with regard to teaching contents that are selected: the Universal Law of Learning, planning processes; Learning, Teaching and Assessment, involved in Educational Fact.
The eight applicable Methodological Approaches to each of the eight Math Program Contents for Sixth Grade Primary Education Curriculum 2011, include: The Study Goal; Didactic Competence and the product that demonstrates its achievement; the student’s previous knowledge and experience; suggested Motivation; Educational Project and Methodological Sequence.
The conclusions drawn from this job also contain a bibliographical reference that I hope will be useful and helpful for teachers to improve their teaching techniques for the benefit of their students.

 

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The Project Justification includes the reasons that induced (not a word often used here in English. Does work, but perhaps you mean convinced?) me to carry out this quasi-experimental Research. The existing problem is posed and it manifests (again unusual wording. do you mean: it manifests itself in the mexican primary school or it states that the Mexican Primary School is a cause?)the Mexican Primary School Descontextualization of Curricular Model 2011, as a primary cause of the problem in the field of educational practice in regard to the teaching of programmatic content.
I justify the reason for choosing Mathematics Subject and specifically the teaching methodology for each programmatic contents of Plan 2011, latest version ( blocks III and IV) to the actual Sixth Grade Primary Education.
Furthermore I expose (prove the goals have been achieved rather than expose? expose tells me you found something bad.) the goals to be achieved with the contextualization Curriculum Model mentioned.
The Theoretical Framework describes the essential conceptualization with regard to teaching contents that are selected: the Universal Law of Learning, planning processes; Learning, Teaching and Assessment, involved in Educational Fact.
The eight applicable Methodological Approaches to each of the eight Math Program Contents for Sixth Grade Primary Education Curriculum 2011, include: The Study Goal; Didactic Competence and the product that demonstrates its achievement; the student’s previous knowledge and experience; suggested Motivation; Educational Project and Methodological Sequence.
The conclusions drawn from this job (no need for a comma) also contain a bibliographical reference that I hope will be useful and helpful for teachers to improve their teaching techniques for the benefit of their students.

 

Much of your English here is correct gramtically speaking, but does not make sense to a native speaker because of the way those words are used most often. I hope that I have helped some, please let me know of any questions. 

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