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today today,at the 5:00pm,my roommate asked me to help her to get a boy's phone number.first,i'm very nervous,i worry he will not give me.but finally,when i talk with him,and he gave me a smile and gave me his number.

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Today, at the 5:00 p.m., my roommate asked me to help her to get a boy's phone number. First, I was very nervous. I worried he would not give it to me. But finally, after I talked with him, and he gave me a  smile, he also gave me his number.

 

Aren't you glad you gave it a try? You were successful. You are a good friend!

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Ttoday at the 5:00 pm my roommate asked me to help her to get a boy's phone number. At first, i'm was very nervous, I i worryied he will not give me his number. Bbut finally, when i talked with to him, and he gave me a smile and gave me his number.

 

 

Was omitting all large letters and spaces intended? If yes, sorry for correcting them. Let me knoe if you have any questons.

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you are courageous!

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