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Face... The spring rain, like fancy stitch, closed knitted under the peaceful lake.(2) I got off the bus with a green umbrella in my hand. I was hurry to go home. Suddenly a ringing sound came to my ear. “hey, girl, can i go with you because i forgot my umbrella.” “of course, just a passing thing” i respond her. It was a middle aged woman who was new here judged by her distinct accent. She appreciated this city and me very much. She described me with words like cultivated and sweet. As i know it’s just sweet words, my steps became light up unconsciously, pleasure and exciting exposed apparently in my face.(7) Sweet words really works. I really feel good when she said i was a sweet girl. We did n’t stop talking and laughing until we say good-by. The delighted umbrella, beaten and touched by the rain, playing the violin symphony with the cooperation of the wind and rain(3) It makes me feel i was the elegant ballet dancer, spinning in the wind. I can’t help singing the song. I realized the meaning of the old saying——send a person a rose, the fragrance will lingering in your hand. The other day, rainy day, i forgot my umbrella. But i did n’t very worried about it since the last time’s experience, what’s more, the way was not so far. I was thinking i would share a umbrella with a nice guy. But things always go contrary to one’s wishes. It was a young and modern girl in front of me, with a flower umbrella. When i ask for a hand, she looked at me shocked, her face like quick-frozen dumplings in the supermarket. But she did n’t refuse me,along the way, we did n’t say a word. I followed his pace. sometimes quick ; Sometimes slow. Finally , reluctant but out of politeness, i have to facking a smile and thanks to the “quick-frozen dumpling ”then rushed into the misty rain curtain.(9) In the rain, i was thinking : seeing the other people get wet, will she get satisfaction? I’m always thinking, if i come across the “quick-frozen dumpling ”after many years, and she forget her umbrella, what should i say to her? What kind of expression will occur in my face?

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Sounds like you read a lot of books in English the way you write, with the metaphors and stuff like that. Haha, “quick-frozen dumpling ”; I like that. I don't know what it means but I'm gonna start saying it.
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Sad story. To be in the rain without an umbrella is bad. But even worse to be a heartless person :))

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