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The rescue was suspended at 4:30 pm, after looking under the bricks, which were on the floor subsequently the accident, hoping to found people still alive, said Lloyd Ayers, fire commissioner.
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"The rescue was suspended at 4:30 pm, after looking under the bricks, which were on the floor, following the accident; we were hoping to find people still alive," said fire commissioner Lloyd Ayers.
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"The rescue was suspended at 4:30 pm after looking under the bricks, which were on the floor, hoping to find people still alive after the accident," said Lloyd Ayers, fire commissioner.
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