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Leisure activities. Leisure activities. Hi everybody. My name is Dao, I come from Quang Binh province. It’s poor province in Viet Nam. I’m 19 years old. Current, I’m studying in Duy Tan University – Da Nang city. I’m a boy, so I prefer leisure activities, playing sport, adventurous.. Hometown has many mountain, landsape, fantastic caves, romantic little rivers. Sometimes, I usually climbing with my friends, swimming, or visit huge caves and curious about things in there. But now, I’m living far away from home. If you go to my hometown, I’ll take you come there, you’ll unexpected about things you see front of your eyes. I think that, hometown shoul have tourism company investment in here.. They will be benefit from its. Growing have many tourists visit my hometown as they know hometown which have many huge caves, beatiful mountain, romantic landsape.

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Leisure activities.

Leisure activities.
Hi everybody. My name is Dao, I come from Quang Binh province. It’s a poor province in Viet Nam. I’m 19 years old. Currently, I’m studying in Duy Tan University – Da Nang city. I’m a boy, so I prefer leisure activities, playing sports, having adventures. My hometown has many mountains, landsapes, fantastic caves, romantic little rivers. Sometimes, I usually climb with my friends, swim, or visit huge caves and am curious about things in there. But now, I’m living far away from home.
If you go to my hometown, I’ll take you on a tour, you’ll be surprised about things you see front of your eyes. I think that my hometown should have investment in tourism company investment in here. They will be benefit from it. A growing number of tourists visit my hometown, as they know my hometown which have has many huge caves, beautiful mountains and romantic landsapes.

 

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