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Global Warming / Environment Protection Global warming has always been a big issue in the whole world. International conservation expert keep trying to drop the hot potato to reduce the amount of carbon dioxide. People who live on the earth should care about to maintain our environment and pay attention to secure our nature resources. Why we need to leave our children a clear place? There is some heavy effects that if we ignore to protect our homeland. The most obvious feeling of our daily life that is the faster rising temperature, the high degree caused iceberg melting, some animals like polar bears are losing their habitat, in the same times, seriously ice-melting also bring the horizon rise. People can’t out of it, some of those low-laying countries will become disappear in few years because of the see level suddenly rise. Facing the crisis, we should reduce using the coal, petroleum and gas, remember to turn off the power when you don’t need to use that. On the other hand, to choice buying efficiently products in your house. Even much better, living in a ”green building” which using sustainable materials and discarded your inefficiently appliances to cut down the energy consumption. For example, the “Bed Zed” that is a housing development in England which was built using green principles, they use tree waste and get energy from solar panels which means they are zero energy waste building. Further said, try your best to do recycle such as papers, plastics, cans and PET bottles that can help our Community entirely different. Who is the right person to save our lovely home? When is the ripe time to get start to do something for group? Where is the wonderland to let us enjoy the valuable life? There is no doubt, protect the earth, is everyone’s responsibility. Before human dogging our own graves, we must be preventing the doomsday coming early. Do the right things, be a good person, make the world likes a paradise instead of going to heaven yourself.

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Global Warming / Environment Protection

Global warming has always been a big issue in the whole world. International conservation experts keep trying to drop the hot potato to reduce the amount of carbon dioxide. People who live on the earth should care about to maintaining our environment and pay attention to securing our natural resources. Why do we need to leave our children a clear place? Because, there  are some heavy effects that if we ignore will cause harm to our homeland.


The most obvious feeling of our daily life that is the faster rising temperature, the high degree of  iceberg melting, some animals like polar bears are losing their habitat, and at the same time, serious ice-melting,  also brought about by temperature rise. People can’t avoid it, some of those low-lying countries will become disappear in a few years because of the sudden rise of sea level suddenly rise. Facing the crisis, we should reduce usage of coal, petroleum and gas, remember to turn off the power when we don’t need to use it. On the other hand, we need to  buy efficient products in our house. Even much better, living in a ”green building” which uses sustainable materials and discarding your inefficient appliances to cut down the energy consumption. For example, the “Bed Zed” that is , a housing development in England that was built using green principles. They use tree waste and get energy from solar panels, which means they are zero energy waste buildings. Further said, try your best to do recycle material such as papers, plastics, cans and PET bottles that can help our Community entirely different.


Who is the right person to save our lovely home?
When is the ripe time to get start to do something for group?
Where is the wonderland that will let us enjoy the valuable life?
There is no doubt, protecting the earth is everyone’s responsibility. Before humans dig their own graves, we must be prevent the doomsday coming early. Do the right things, be a good person, make the world like a paradise instead of going to heaven yourself.

 

[Good message.  You use 'efficiently' (an adverb) with verbs ("He does his job efficiently").  'Efficient' is an adjective and used with nouns - ("efficient building materials").]

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