My favorite things

1. One of my favorite movies
"Departures" tells a story about an unemployed cellist. The cellist find a new job, encoffineer. An encoffineer is a funeral professional who prepares deceased bodies for burial and entry into the next life. While his wife and others despise the job, the hero takes a certain pride in his work and begins to perfect the art of encoffineer, acting as a gentle gatekeeper between life and death, between the departed and the family of the departed. By some comical and sad stories, the film shows the wonder, joy and meaning of life and living.
2. One of my favorite books
"Harry Potter" is not only a book for me, but an old friend. In the past ten years, I grew with the roles of this book. They make me know what is friendship, what is love, what is justice and how to be a brave one. What's more, it is really an interesting and attractive book.
3. Sport
My favorite sport is aerobics. After 45 minutes dancing, I will be dripping with sweat. I enjoy this feeling and I will become refreshed. What's more, dancing aerobics can promote physical fitness and shape my body.

This is very well written with only a few, very minor points to correct. Well done!

I've never heard of an encoffineer. We call a person in this profession a mortician, undertaker or funeral director.

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