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My family Thank for reading my entry and hope you to correct evey mistakes I made. Thank you! My family is small. There are five people: my mom and dad, my aunt, my sister and me. We are close-knit and share many things in life together. My parents work in the same factory, but in different positions. Dad is a guard and mom a cook. My mom have to work all day, but dad only works at night. My aunt works as a housekeeper. She leaves home at 9 am and come back at 5 pm. Since mom and aunt are busy all the time, my sister and I shared the household tasks. My sister studies in highschool and I in college. She is four years younger than me. We are not only siblings but also best friends. She shared every things with me and so do I. Sometimes in the weekend I help her with her homework or go shopping with her. Family is the most important thing in my life. Family halves my grief, doubles my joys. They always support me and are generous with my mistakes. I love my family.

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My family

Thank for reading my entry and I hope that you to correct evey mistakes that I've made. Thank you!

My family is small. There are five people: my mom and dad, my aunt, my sister and me. We are a close-knit family and share many things in life together.
My parents work in at the same factory, but in different positions. Dad is a guard and mom a cook.
My mom have has to work all day, but dad only works at night. My aunt works as a housekeeper. She leaves home at 9 am and come comes back at 5 pm. Since As mom and aunt are busy all the time, my sister and I shared share the household tasks.
My sister studies in highschool and I in college. She is four years younger than me. We are not only siblings but also best friends She shared every things with me and so do I and we share everything with each other. Sometimes in at the weekend I help her with her homework or go shopping with her.
Family is the most important thing in my life. My family halves my grief and doubles my joys joy. They always support me and are generous with understanding about my mistakes. I love my family.

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They help me o lot Thank you! Best wishes for you and your family
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Hi, I hope these corrections help! I enjoyed reading about your lovely family:)) Best wishes, Clair

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