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Tour in the US:
I had an amazing trip at last week. First I visited Los Angles. I went to Universal Studios. I really liked the haunted house and 3D movies (did you see more than one? If no, just say 3D movie) of Transformers. It was so fun and cool!
Then I went to Las Vegas. I lost 300 dollars on Black Jack before I went to sleep. I like the hotels there. They are so beautiful, especially The Venician. It has a river and artificial sky inside.
Since I also love natural scenery, of course I also visited Yellowstone National Park. The weather wasbeautiful and sunny that day. Yellowstone has a lot of hot springs, pools, and wild animals. It's just a pity I didn't see a bear!
Now I have come back home. I live in Beijing.
Tour in the US
I had an amazing trip at last week. First I visited Los Angles. I went to the Universal Studios; I like haunted house and 3D movies for Transformers, it was so fun and cool!
Then I went to Las Vegas. I lost 300 dollars at Black Jack and went back to sleep. I like the hotels there, they are so beautiful, especially the Venice, it has a river and artificial sky in hallway.
Of course I also loved the natural scenery! I visited Yellowstone National Park. It was on a beautiful day, with sunny weather. There were a lot of hot springs and pools and many wild animals. But it is a pity I haven't seen a bear.
Now I just got back home. I live in Beijing.
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