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Tour in the US I had a amazing trip at last week.first I visited Los Angles,I went to the universal studios, I like haunted house and 3D movies for Transformers,it's so fun and cool ! and then I went to Las Vegas. I lost 300 dollars on Black Jack and go back sleep, I like the hotel there , there are so beautiful, The Venice hotel is specially, it has a river and artificial sky in hall. of course I love natural scenery ! so I visited Yellowstone national park. that day is beautiful day, the weather is sunny. there are a lot of hot spring and pools and more wild animals. but It is a pity I heaven't seen a bear. now I just go back home. I live in Beijing.

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Tour in the US:

I had an amazing trip at last week. First I visited Los Angles. I went to Universal Studios. I really liked the haunted house and 3D movies (did you see more than one? If no, just say 3D movie) of Transformers. It was so fun and cool! 

Then I went to Las Vegas. I lost 300 dollars on Black Jack before I went to sleep. I like the hotels there. They are so beautiful, especially The Venician. It has a river and artificial sky inside. 
 
Since I also love natural scenery, of course I also visited Yellowstone National Park. The weather wasbeautiful and sunny that day. Yellowstone has a lot of hot springs, pools, and wild animals. It's just a pity I didn't see a bear! 

Now I have come back home. I live in Beijing.

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Tour in the US

I had an amazing trip at last week. First I visited Los Angles. I went to the Universal Studios; I like haunted house and 3D movies for Transformers, it was so fun and cool!

Then I went to Las Vegas. I lost 300 dollars at Black Jack and went back to sleep. I like the hotels there, they are so beautiful, especially the Venice, it has a river and artificial sky in hallway.

Of course I also loved the natural scenery! I visited Yellowstone National Park. It was on a beautiful day, with sunny weather. There were a lot of hot springs and pools and many wild animals. But it is a pity I haven't seen a bear.

Now I just got back home. I live in Beijing.

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thanks for your correct.
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I'm glad to hear you had a nice visit!

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