Imaginary situation. I'm just trying to practise my grammar in English.
Dear, (..name..)
On 10th of July I’ll meet at the Airport Koltsovo in Yekaterinburg at 4:35 p.m. We will come to my flat in Pervouralsk, which near Ekaterinburg. So you need some things for personal care and closes, which you like.
On the next day we are going to see some places in Yekaterinburg: “Church on the Blood”, main square, Museum of the History of Yekaterinburg and Theatre of Opera and Ballet. Weather should be warm, you can wear T-shirt with shorts and comfortable shoes. Also we’ll have a lunch, so you’d better give some cash with you.
On the 12th of July we’ll have free day for walking in two towns, shopping and trying traditional Russian food.
On the 13th of July we are going to visit zoo and park.
On the next day I’ll be hold up you to the airport at 7.30 a.m.
Let me know if you have some questions.
Best wishes,
Kate
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Imaginary situation. I'm just trying to practise my grammar in English.
Dear, (..name..)
On July 10th, 10th of July I’ll meet you at the Airport Koltsovo in Yekaterinburg at 4:35 p.m. We will come to my flat in Pervouralsk, which is near Ekaterinburg. So You will need to bring some things for your personal care things and clothes closes that you like. which you like.
On the next day, we are going to see some places in Yekaterinburg: “Church on the Blood,”, main square, Museum of the History of Yekaterinburg, and the Theatre of Opera and Ballet. The Weather will should be warm, so you should can wear a T-shirt with shorts and comfortable shoes. Also, we’ll have a lunch, so you’d better give should bring some cash with you.
On the 12th of July 12th, we’ll have a free day of for walking in two towns, shopping, and trying (eating sounds better) traditional Russian food.
On the 13th (repetitive; you can leave out July) of July we are going to visit a zoo and a park.
On the next day, I’ll bring be hold up you to the airport at 7:30 a.m.
Let me know if you have any some questions.
Best wishes,
Kate
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Imaginary situation. I'm just trying to practise my grammar in English.
Dear XYZ,
On July 10th, I’ll meet you at Koltsovo airport in Yekaterinburg at 4:35 p.m.. We will come to my flat here in Pervouralsk, which is near Ekaterinburg. So, you need some things for personal care and the clothes that you like.
The next day, we are going to see some places in Yekaterinburg; the Church on the Blood, the main square, the Museum of History of Yekaterinburg and the Theatre of Opera and Ballet. The weather should be warm, you can wear a T-shirt with shorts and comfortable shoes. Also, we’ll have lunch, so it would be good to have some money with you.
On the 12th, we’ll have a free day for visiting two towns, for shopping and trying traditional Russian food.
On the 13th we are going to visit the zoo and park.
The next morning I will drop you off at the airport at 7.30 a.m.
Let me know if you have some (any) questions.
Best wishes,
Kate
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Dear should be lucky with that schedule :P
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