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public servant In recent years, there has been an increase in the number of youngsters who work as public servant in government. It is true that public servant is popular and suitable for some young people. I believe that the youth should choose jobs in terms of their qualifications and preferences, rather than simply pursuing the popular jobs. On the one hand, some people’s pursuit for public servant is due to the belief that working in government means stable, decent as well as powerful. For example, in china, young adults who serve as public servant have more opportunities to carve out a successful career than their counterparts, making the position engaging and desirable. Furthermore, once a person becomes a leader, he or she will embrace almost everything including money, power and social status. On the other hand, it is not suitable for every young people for various reasons. Firstly, working in government does not mean success and happiness. Instead, many public servants have been struggling for their dreams to be a leader as a result of fierce competition, therefore, unsatisfied with their life. Secondly, more and more young people holding the position in government will have a negative impact on the society because they prefer to climbing the ladder quickly rather than serving for people better. Finally, there are a large variety of satisfying jobs, such as teacher, doctor, scientist, which offers the young opportunities to succeed. In conclusion, although public servant is a decent job for the young, it is not the only career path to fulfillment. Everyone has a chance to succeed through hard working, regardless of profession.

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public servant 

In recent years, there has been an increase in the number of youngsters who work as public servants in government. It is true that public servant service is popular and suitable for some young people, but I believe that the youth should choose jobs in terms of their qualifications and preferences, rather than simply pursuing the popular jobs.

On the one hand, some people’s pursuit for public servant service is due to the belief that working in government means stable stability, decent ???as well as and  powerful. For example, in China, young adults who serve as public servants have more opportunities to carve out a successful career than their counterparts, making the position engaging and desirable. Furthermore, once a person becomes a leader, he or she will embrace almost everything including money, power and social status.

On the other hand, it is not suitable for every young people, for various reasons. Firstly, working in government does not mean success and happiness. Instead, many public servants have been struggling for their dreams to be a leader as a result of fierce competition, and therefore are unsatisfied with their life. Secondly, more and more young people holding a position in government will have a negative impact on the society because they prefer to climbing the ladder quickly rather than serving for people better. Finally, there are a large variety of satisfying jobs in teaching, medicine and science that offers the young opportunities to succeed.

In conclusion, although being a public servant is a decent job for the young, it is not the only career path to fulfillment. Everyone has a chance to succeed through hard working, regardless of profession.

 

This was excellent. First Class!

Just remember that a public servant performs a public service.  The job title is public service, it is performed by a public servant. In English, we use the term Government Employee because they do not like being called servants.
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public servant

In recent years, there has been an increase in the number of youngsters who work as public servants or the government. It is true that public servants are popular and suitable for some young people. I believe that the youth should be able to choose jobs in terms of their qualifications and preferences, rather than simply pursuing the popular jobs.

On the one hand, some people’s pursuit for public servant jobs are due to the belief that working in government means stability and power. For example, in china, young adults who serve as public servants have more opportunities to carve out a successful career than their counterparts, making the position engaging and desirable. Furthermore, once a person becomes a leader, he or she will embrace almost everything including money, power and social status.

On the other hand, it is not suitable for every young people person for various reasons. Firstly, working for the government does not mean success and happiness. Instead, many public servants have been struggling for their dreams to be a leader as a result of fierce competition, therefore, they become unsatisfied with their life. Secondly, more and more young people holding the position in government will have a negative impact on the society because they prefer to climbing the ladder quickly rather than serving for people better. Finally, there are a large variety of satisfying jobs, such as teaching, becoming a doctor or scientist etc, which offers the young opportunities to succeed.

In conclusion, although being a public servant is a decent job for the young, it is not the only career path that leads to fulfillment. Everyone has a chance to succeed through hard working, regardless of profession.

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Good job - nice writing!
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真的是hard working啊,现在公务员说万里挑一真不为过。不过目前来看有个叫李刚的爹比什么都强。文章不错,顶一下

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