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Today is a nice day
Today is a* seniors' day in St.John's. I was a volunteer here to assisting with (managing) a literature booth management. People can take some health tips flyers away for free. And if they put their name and phone on onte they will have a* chance to win a* prize- it is pretty nice bag.
(*English articles - "a" and "the" are one of the hardest things to learn. Let me know if you have questions about my corrections)
Many elderly people came together to the health fair. I suppose probably there were 200 seniors.I am very afraid to become old. However, I saw these people singing and dancing. They enjoyed themselves* and felt happy. At the moment , I was touched. I'd like to say they appeared even younger than me.
(*The verb "enjoyed" either needs to be
1. reflexive: they enjoyed themselves, I enjoyed myself, he enjoyed himself
2. with a direct object: He enjoyed playing soccer, I enjoy swimming, I enjoyed the food)
Today is a really nice day.
I understand your feeling about seeing elderly people. I often feel the same way. It's sad to see them sick but also really great when they're laughing and smiling like young teenagers :)
Today is a nice day
Today is a seniors' day in St.John's. I was a volunteer here to assist a literature booth management. People can take some health tips flyers away for free. And if they put their name and phone number on there they will have chance to win the prize- it is a pretty nice bag.
Many elderly people came together to the health fair. I suppose probably there were 200 seniors.I am very afraid to become old. However, I saw these people singing and dancing. They enjoyed and felt happy. At that moment , I was touched. I'd like to say they were even younger than me.
Today is a really nice day.
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