I Must do something
I was graduated my Highschool 2 weeks ago. Some my friend asking me about university, and a question is always about university.
1. Which university do you like?
2. Do you not going to university?
3. What are you doing If you not take a college?
4. How about your future? If you not take a college you will not have a job?
Back when I graduate, When I back to home and I said to my parents I'm pass. And I sit on sofa, My mother ask me : What are you doing after this? and I said : I will do what I want.
I Likes to make my own bussiness than I work in company, but my friend and some my parents not supported me because I'm not takes a college. I know my different thinking is crazy than my friend , because that I must do something.
I hope someone correct my entry. Thank you
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I Must do something
I graduated highschool 2 weeks ago. Some of my friends are asking me about university, every question is related to college:
1. Which university do you like?
2. Are you not going to university?
3. What are you doing if you do not go to college?
4. How about your future? If you do not go to college you will not have a job.
When I graduated, I went back home and told my parents. Then I sat on the sofa, my mother asked me, 'What are you doing after this?' and I said, 'I will do what I want.'
I would like to own my business rather than work for a company. My friends and family are unsupportive because I do not want to go university. I know my plan sounds different and crazy to my friends, because of this I must do something
I hope someone will correct my entry. Thank you
I am too tired to put color codes and strikethroughs. Sorry! I hope this helps you
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