yesterday's conflict
yesterday,we have a conflict with the football team,almost twenty peoples take part in the fighting,and my brother was hurt in the fighting.The steam roll out of my ears.
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Yesterday's Conflict
Yesterday, we have had a conflict (you can also say "brawl" or "fight") with the football team. Almost twenty peoples take (took--past tense) part in the fighting, and my brother was hurt (in the fighting). The steam roll rolled out of my ears. In this sentence, your meaning is very clear. However, in English we would not normally express it this way. "I was steaming" is an expression commonly used to say "I was furious" or "I was very angry." Sometimes an English speaker might say "I had steam coming out of my ears," which would mean the same thing.
Overall, good job! I'm impressed by your attempt to incorporate a figure of speech.
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Megan's correction is great of course..just want to let you know of an alternative that is widely used: "my brother got hurt"
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