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(English diary) For long time i write english diary . These days i am learing my job skills , i could not write a english diary but i want to improve my english skills . Yesterday my mother had birthday but i did not know until around 11:00 am , beside i came back home in the morning because i hang it out with my friends at night , Finally my mother really had angry to me , i had to find her gift , i thought for one hours , finally i found her gift , it is cook i decide to make a cook for my mother , actually i do not make a cook hahahaha i bought some of food and made a cook for one hours , i was searching on internet andthen i found how to make a some of food. when my mother came back to home at that time i showed my foods andthen my mother be surprised to me ^^ my mother be happy today hahahahaha

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(English diary)

For long time I have written in an English diary .
These days I am learing my job skills. I could not write an English diary before, but I want to improve my English skills .
Yesterday my mother had birthday, but I did not know until around 11:00 am, besides, I came back home in the morning because I hang it out with my friends at night ,
Finally my mother really had angry to me , i had to find her gift. I thought for one hour. Finally I found her gift , it is to cook a meal.
I decided to make a cook for my mother, actually I did not do any cooking hahahaha
I bought some of food and cooked it for one hour. I was searching on the internet and then I found how to make a some of the food.
When my mother came back to home at that time I showed the meal that I prepared and then my mother be surprised with me ^^


My mother is happy today hahahahaha

 

[The most important thing about a present is the thought and effort that went into it.  Remember to capitalize 'I' as a pronoun and put a space only after a period and comma, not before them.]

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