對不起，但是這個冬天我不去中國。我不高興咕~~(╯﹏╰)b
我真的了想去中國 D:
所以這個冬天我Stay in 紐約。
我希望我可以去加拿大！！ 哈哈
如果你要，你可以加我[email protected]
let's hope that was all correct, though i'm sure it's not.
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well, if u really wanna improve your chinese, u should have a QQ number! u know what is it? 中国人都用这个！去随便找个人，他都可以让你突飞猛进！！
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sad to hear that.
所以這個冬天我Stay in 紐約。
我希望我可以去加拿大！！ 哈哈
如果你有需要( 想)，你可以加我[email protected]
let's hope that was all correct, though i'm sure it's not.
good job. somebody said 咕 is sound word. cry sound, how did you find that? like the 啦, 哎.you need some blank or punctuation. them it won't be a adverb. Anyway we can understand it expresses you crying.
對不起，但是這個冬天我不去中國。我不高興咕~~(╯﹏╰)b
我真的了想去中國 D:所以這個冬天我Stay in 紐約。
我希望我可以去加拿大！！ 哈哈
如果你有需要( 想)，你可以加我[email protected]
let's hope that was all correct, though i'm sure it's not.
good job. somebody said 咕 is sound word. cry sound, how did you find that? like the 啦, 哎.you need some blank or punctuation. them it won't be a adverb. Anyway we can understand it expresses you crying.
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標題的 咕和表情 用得很傳神啊！！
可是一般“咕”是不放在句子后而是獨成一句的喲~
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對不起，但是這個冬天我不去中國。我不高興咕~~(╯﹏╰)b
我真的不想去中國 D:所以這個冬天我留在紐約。
但是，我希望可以去加拿大！！ 哈哈
如果你要（what? go to Canada）
你可以加我的MSN：[email protected]
we can understand u, and... i think ur words looks so fashion...
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對不起，但是這個冬天我不去中國。我不高興咕~~(╯﹏╰)b
我真的了想去中國 D:所以這個冬天我Stay in 紐約。
我希望我可以去加拿大！！ 哈哈
如果你要，你可以加我[email protected]
let's hope that was all correct, though i'm sure it's not.
遗憾啊，这个冬天我去不了中国了。我（感觉）不高兴。
我真的很想去中国，但是我得待在(stay in)纽约。
希望我可以去加拿大！哈哈……
如果你想，可以加我的…………
My foreign English teacher told me that if others know what you say,then good job!
我能知道你想说什么，说明你基本表达没问题，只是还需要进一步提高！加油啦……
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