Attending yoga class

This evening after having supper, (eating dinner sounds more natural) me and my mother and I went to a yoga center which newly recently  opened at nearby. It's really hard to imitate some of the gestures, ("movements" sounds betteon instead of "gestures") as this is my first class. Even though (or you could say "although" instead of "even though")  my shoulders felt soar sore and my legs felt like jelly, I still carried on. l am so tired that so much I was afraid l couldn't finish this essay because I almost get fell asleep slept just now.

Blue is suggestions, red is corrections

Good job for a non-native English speaker!

-Hannah

Attending a yoga class

This evening after having supper, me and mother and I went to a yoga center which newly recently opened at nearby. It's really hard to imitate some gestures, as this is my first class.  Even though my shoulders felt sore and my legs felt like jelly, I still carried on. l am so tired so much，I'm afraid l couldn't finish this essay. I almost went to sleep just now.

[Good work.  Remember that we use possessives and articles more than Chinese (MY shoulders).  A friend once showed me a picture of a yoga teacher in India.  If I tried to get in that pose, I'd need a doctor to get me out.]