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Weekly summary-June 01 This week I improved a program that I wrote last week. When the boss told me that I should deal with that work with one line code. I thought that was impossible. But I did it and I decreased the processing time from 10 minutes to 30 seconds. It was a big progress. Today I went to school (Wall Street English) and attended a class. The teacher gave us a lot of pictures and asked us where the buildings or places in pictures located in. I saw so many beautiful places I never heard. I suddenly realized that how wonderful the rest of the world is. I think it will be one of my dreams to go to some beautiful places. Happiness was the topic of today's English corner. We talked a lot about happiness. It's hard to define what is happiness and how to get happiness. Because happiness is just a kind of feeling and it is different for different pepple. But there are some important factors really effect us to feel happiness a lot. Maslow's hierarchy of needs said that there are six levels what a person needs: they are physiological needs, safety needs, love and belonging needs, esteem needs, self-actualization needs from low to high. As a normal person, I think we should have a healthy body and a harmonious family espect physiological needs. If someon has a job he/she likes and has some free time expect above. That would be enviable.

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Weekly summary-June 01

This week I improved a program that I wrote last week. When the boss told me that I should deal with that work with a single line code. I thought that was impossible. But I did it and I decreased the processing time from 10 minutes to 30 seconds. It was quite a progress.
Today I went to school (Wall Street English) and attended a class. The teacher gave us a lot of pictures and asked us where the buildings or places in pictures located . I saw so many beautiful places I have never heard of before. I suddenly realized  how wonderful the rest of the world is. It one of my dreams to visit some of those beautiful places.
Happiness was the topic of today's English corner. We talked a lot about happiness. It's hard to define what is happiness and how to get happiness. Because happiness is just a kind of feeling and it is different for different people. But there are some important factors that really effect us to feel happiness more. Maslow's hierarchy of needs said that there are six levels what a person needs: they are physiological needs, safety needs, love and belonging needs, esteem needs, self-actualization needs from low to high. As a normal person, I think we should have a healthy body and a harmonious family in respect of physiological needs. If someone has a job he/she likes and has some free time expect above. That would be enviable.

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