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In sociology the way that people live, including their living conditions, behavior and habits is considered as their lifestyle. In the modern world there are a variety of different lifestyles; thus, some people tend to change their lifestyle and experience new ones, although some others are determined to follow a stable lifestyle. Both of these ideas are elaborated below.
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please correct my mistakes :)
In sociology the way that people live, including their living conditions life condition, behavior and habits is considered as their lifestyle. In the modern world there are a variety of different lifestyles; thus, some people tend to change their lifestyle and experience new ones, although some others are determined to follow a stable lifestyle. Both of these ideas are elaborated below.
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That's really good. It is grammatically correct, although I would word it as follows:
In sociology the way that people live, also known as their lifestyle, includes their living conditions, behavior and habits. In the modern world there are a variety of different lifestyles. Some people change their lifestyle and experience a new one with some regularity, although others prefer stability and are determined to live the same way. Both of these ideas are elaborated below.
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