生活周记

今天是美好的一天，外面的空气很清新，因为刚下过雨的缘故，天空也变得格外的蓝，一朵朵的白云是那么优雅的漂浮在空中，抬头仰望天空，闭上眼睛深吸一口气，多么美好的一天啊！

Today is a very nicebeautiful) day .Outside  the air is very fresh,because it just rained and the sky also have become blue, yellow is so elegant with white clouds floating in the sky. Looking at the sky, I closed my eyes and taked a deep breath ,what a nice(beautiful) day!

生活周记

今天是美好的一天，外面的空气很清新，因为刚下过雨的缘故，天空也变得格外的蓝，一朵朵的白云是那么优雅的漂浮在空中，抬头仰望天空，闭上眼睛深吸一口气，多么美好的一天啊！

Today is very nicebeautiful) day .Outside air is very fresh,because just rained and the sky also become blue, yellow is so elegant white clouds floating in the sky. look at the sky,close my eyes take a deep breath ,what a nice(beautiful) day!

When you translate this kind of writing into English, it looses some of the feeling that it has in Chinese. Anyhow, here's how I would write it. 

Today is a beautiful day. The air outisde is fresh, and the sky is especially blue, because it just rained. Fluffy white clouds are graceflly floating in the sky. I raise my head and look to the sky, close close my eyes and take a deep breath. What an amazing day!