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The secret of your eyes
I look you straight in the eyes
They reveal every experience, every word
And every feelings you've felt
And you become a secret
With these two beautiful constellations
They illuminate the path you walk.
The secret of your eyes
It is the revelation
From ancient poetry
What they reflect inspires a new dawn
Although you suffer some.
The secret of your eyes
Maraca, a vibrant destination and
The destination radiate from your pupils
Blue as the seas and intense
As light radiating from
The stars .
The secret of your eyes
Wrap in love,
Softens and poisons
Because with just one look
I fell and surrendered at your feet.
The secret of your eyes
I look you straight in the eyes
They reveal Every experience, every word
And every feelings you've felt
And you become a secret
With these two beautiful constellations
They illuminate the path you walk.
The secret of your eyes
It is the revelation
From ancient poetry
What they reflect inspires
And a new dawn
Although you suffer some.
The secret of your eyes
Maraca, a vibrant destination and
The destination radiate from your pupils
Blue as seas and intense
As light radiating from
The star .
The secret of your eyes
Wrap in love,
Softens and poisons
Because with just one look
I fell and surrendered at your feet.
The secret of your eyes
Just see you straight in the eyes (should it be 'look' and not 'see'?)
To discover and read
Every experience, every word
And every feeling you've lived
And you become a secret
With these two beautiful constellations
They illuminate your path you walk (do you mean 'the path you walk' or 'your path, your walk'?)
The secret of your eyes
It is the revelation
From earliest poetry
What to read inspires (should be 'that' or 'which')
A new day
And a new dawn
Although some sad suffer. ('from sadness suffer' or 'suffer some sadness' - it is wrong as it is)
The secret of your eyes
Maraca (signs, hints?) a destination and because (Marks? Maracas? but then it is repeated. )
The destination marked on your pupils
Blue as sunlit seas and intense
As light radiating/ streaming from
The star sun.
The secret of your eyes
Wraps and love
Softens and poisons
Because with just to see/seeing them(?)
Drop One falls, surrendersed at your feet.
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