summer vacation plan
Having been longing for an excellent summer holiday,i make a plan for this summer holiday.
during the first month ,i am going to do a part-time job to earn some money so that i could pay for my holiday outlay.At the same time,i have a chance to get touch to different people in differet working area.
After that ,i am going to travel to lijiang,a place that i miss day and night.
Lijiang is a beautiful and historical city,where the scenery is great and there are many graceful romantic stories there.it is a magical and holy place.
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summer vacation plan
Having been longing for an excellent summer holiday,i make made a plan for this summer holiday.
during the first month ,i am going to do work a part-time job to earn some money so that i could pay for my holiday outlay expenses.At the same time,i have a chance to get in touch to with different people in differet working areas.
After that ,i am going to travel to lijiang,a place that i miss day and night.
Lijiang is a beautiful and historical city,where the scenery is great and there are many graceful, romantic stories there.it is a magical and holy place.
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Also remember to:
- capitalize the first word of every sentence
- put a space after periods, commas, questions marks, etc.
- the word "i" should always be capitalized as "I"
Enjoy Lijiang! I also heard it's beautiful.
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