My Painting

Today the sun shines brightly, and the wind blows gently.
I opened my arms and enjoyed this wonderful moment.
After the breakfast, I put a desk to the garden for painting.
In front of me, the leaves of the bamboo swing gently in the breeze, just like waved to me.
Birds were flying. Everyithing looked enjoyable.
And then my feeling came. I tried to put this sight into my painting via ink and brush.
What a nice day! I enjoyed it.
Hope you can have such a day!

Cassie, I enjoy reading your English essays. They are always so descriptive, so the reader can perfectly capture the scene in his or her mind. What you have written is well structured and the only focus needed is in correcting the tense. Hence, as you are writing about something which has already happened, then you just need to ensure the whole essay is written in the past tense. I would suggest the following amendments:-

My Painting

Today the sun SHONE (shines) brightly (,) and the wind BLEW (blows) gently. I opened my arms TO (and) ENJOY (enjoyed) this wonderful moment. After (the) breakfast, I TOOK A DESK OUT TO THE GARDEN TO DO SOME PAINTING (put a desk to the garden for painting). In front of me, the leaves of the bamboo SWUNG (swing) gently in the breeze, AS IF WAVING (just like waved) to me. Birds were flying. EVERYTHING (Everyithing) looked SO PERFECT (enjoyable). OVERCOME WITH THIS FEELING (And then my feeling came), I tried to CAPTURE THE SCENE (put this sight into) IN my painting WITH MY INK AND BRUSH PENS (via ink and brush). What a nice day IT WAS! I enjoyed it SO MUCH! Hope you ALSO HAD (can have) such a GOOD day!

PS:  And I think you succeeded in capturing the scene perfectly in your painting. It is very pretty and charming.