my dream

i am living in a city far away from my home town. i am was born and brought up in a village. my days I were was filled with joy and happiness during my time in my the village. the air was clear and water was pure there. atmosphere was filled with(full of) songs of different birds and blossoms of different flowers(We can hear the birds singing and see the flowers blossoming out hither and thither). but here, in this city, i can see only dust and smoke everywhere. i can't get pure water here either. i hate this place and i want to go back to my village. the people here are running in a hurry time . they don't have time to play, speak and or even smile to each other. i don't know who are is living near next to my house.in my village we all lived together as a family and i really miss my life there.

You should use capital letters in this passage and to be honest,the city we choose,espcially some big cites we worked and lived right now are not the way we want to live actually. I guess most of us just wanner to earn more money and try to live in a better life style.Perhaps when we grow older,we may just return to our hometown.

well , I advise you may experience how beautiful the city life is from another point of view. The things you talked about is real , nonetheless , there is another side of metropolis that you may savor .