My plan for an excursion with our company
Our company excursion is going to Berlin. We are going to travel by train and we stay at a hotel near the Brandenburger Tor. From there we look for a lake where swimming is permitted. And we will lie in the sun all day. Between the relaxing times in the sun we will go into the water to cool off. At the next day we are going to travel to our homes and again by train.
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My plan for an excursion with our company
Our company excursion is going to Berlin. We are going to travel by train and we [You can use "we will" or "will", but not "we" by itself] stay at a hotel near the Brandenburger Tor. From there we will look for a lake where swimming is permitted. And, [use commas after interjections like these] we will lie in the sun all day. Between the relaxing times in the sun we will go into the water to cool off. At On the next day we are going to travel to our homes, and again by train.
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My plan for an excursion with our company
Our company excursion is going to Berlin. (Our company is going on an excursion to Berlin) We are going to travel by train and we will stay at (in) a hotel near the Brandenburger Tor. From there we will look for a lake where swimming is permitted. And we will lie in the sun all day. Between the relaxing times in the sun (Between periods of relaxing in the sun) we will go into the water to cool off. At the next day we are going to travel to our homes and again by train.
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