space exploration
In recent years, an increased number of scientists are engaged in space exploration, striving to discover and expand to new space. Some people think that it should be stopped as it has wasted numerous resources. However, I hardly agree with this statement.
It is understandable that some people argue that space exploration is not worthwhile because it costs large amounts of money which can be spent on other necessities such as transportation and education, rather than wasting on exploring the space. Admittedly, such discovery consumes a plenty of time, energy and wealth, with a potential risk that the studies involved may fail and have no positive result.
However, the investment is worth because of various advantages. Firstly, our living conditions can be dramatically improved through it. For example, over the past decades, a variety of satellites has been launched, which play an important role in positioning, weather forecasting, time adjusting, etc. Secondly, space exploration makes a great contribution to the development of science and technology, which would slow down without these drives. Finally, new discoveries can help people build up their confidence in such a way that they tend to do everything which they imagine. It is space exploration that makes it come true to walk on the moon.
In conclusion, the disadvantages of space exploration are significantly outweighed by its advantages. I believe that more money should be spent to accelerate the exploration of new space, meeting the increasing consumption requirements of people on earth.
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Reed, I'm really impressed with your vocabulary. It's really good. You just have a few little things to clean up, and your writing will be very good. For instance don't say: "Firstly" Just say First. Secondly and thirdly are good however. I think you use "the" in some strange spots as well. If nobody gets to this by tonight, I'll have another look at it. Good job and good luck!
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