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My today Today, Wind is strong. I have many homeworks, reports and presantations. But I want to take a rest. It will be rain..........I have to go work tomorrow..

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My day.

Today, the wind is strong and I have a lot of homework, reports and presantations to do but I want to take a rest.
It will be raining tomorrow and I'll have to go to work

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My today My Day

Today, The wind is strong.
I have many homeworks, reports and presantations. Presentations!
But I want to take a rest.
It will be rain.......... It's going to rain.

I have to go work tomorrow..

 

If you want to make it better, Rearrange it.

Put the "It's going to rain" next to "The wind is strong.". 

 

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My Today This Day

Today, the wind is strong. 
I have many homeworks, reports and presentations to do but I want to take a rest. 
It will be raining...But I have to go work tomorrow.

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I didn't change much of the structure as your entry sounded like a poem! ㅋㅋ

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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My Day

 

Today, there is strong wind.
I have a lot of homework and reports and presentations to finish.
But, I want some rest.

It's going to rain soon and I have to go to work tomorrow.

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