successful people

nowadays i am studying English at Academy   1  [USE "THE" ..."THE ACADEMY"  --- REVIEW A/AN/THE]
요즘 나는 학원에서 영어 공부를 합니다.

and we use the book which is wrote by Brian tracy.  2  ["a book" written by Brian Tracy"]
use "a" instead of "the" because maybe Brian has more than 1 book written by him.
그리고 브라이언 트레이시가 지은 책을 이용합니다.

the subject is about successful people like himself.
그 주제는 자기와 같은 성공한 사람들에 관한 것 입니다.

successful people think about there] future specifically        3 USE 'THEIR' INSTEAD OF 'THERE'] 

they imagine that what would i be doing if my life was perfect in five years.
how much money wuold i have in the bank if my life was perfect?
what kind of home or marraige would i have if my life was perfect?

i believe this rule of success. and now i want to share with you.

only think about your future. only think about where you're going.

if you are your door will open , you will get the same result as the top 10% people in the world.

[VERY GOOD, SORRY FOR MAKING 2 VERSIONS OF CORRECTIONS.... GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR STUDIES!!!)
 

Successful People

Nowadays I am studying English at Academy, 
요즘 나는 학원에서 영어 공부를 합니다.

and we use a book whi ch is written by Brian Tracy.
그리고 브라이언 트레이시가 지은 책을 이용합니다.

The subject is about successful people like himself.
그 주제는 자기와 같은 성공한 사람들에 관한 것 입니다.

Successful people think about their future specifically. 

They imagine, that "What would I be doing if my life was perfect in five years?
How much money would I have in the bank if my life was perfect?
What kind of home or marriage would I have if my life was perfect?"

i believe this is the rule of success. And now I want to share it with you.

Only think about your future. Only think about where you're going.

If you are, your door will open and you will get the same result as the top 10% of people in the world.

successful people

nowadays i am studying English at the Academy
요즘 나는 학원에서 영어 공부를 합니다.

and we use a book written by Brian Tracy.
그리고 브라이언 트레이시가 지은 책을 이용합니다.

the subject is about successful people like himself.
그 주제는 자기와 같은 성공한 사람들에 관한 것 입니다.

successful people think about there future specifically

they imagine what they would be doing in their life that would be perfect five years
from now.  
how much money wuold i have in the bank if my life was perfect?
what kind of home or marraige would i have if my life was perfect?

i believe in this rule of success. and now i want to share it with you.

only think about your future. only think about where you're going.

if you do your door will open , you will get the same result as the top 10% people in the world.