去梅洲旅行
今年夏天我去了廣東，梅州。這個城市很小還有沒什麼東西看。它沒有太多建築物或者商場店鋪。可是我會總要愛梅州。它不是繁忙的城市。我從來沒有看摩托車出租車。這是非常有趣。梅州人是老婆孩子熱炕頭的地方。農人的生活方式感動了我。我的親屬都是農民。他們沒有很多錢，可是他們很滿意語他們的生活
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去梅洲旅行
今年夏天我去了广东的梅州。那是个很小的城市，几乎没有什么可以观光的。既没有高楼大厦也没有大型商铺。可是我很喜欢梅州，它是个悠闲的城市。我从没有见过摩的，这非常有趣。。
sorry，以下偷懒罢工，咔咔。
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去梅洲旅行
今年夏天我去了廣東，梅州(or you can say : 廣東的梅州)。這個城市很小0
为了中外友好，我再鞭策下自己，努力改作文：
上段见之前的帖子。
下段：
梅州人简朴的生活方式感動了我。我的親屬都是農民，尽管沒有很多錢，可他們都很滿意现有的生活。
此所谓，粗茶淡饭饱即休，补破遮寒暖即休，心态要好，咔咔。
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去梅洲旅行梅州之旅（this is more like a title）
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English version:
This summer I went to Guangdong, Meizhou. There was very little to see in this city. Not too many buildings or shopping malls. But I will always love Meizhou. It is not a busy town. I have never seen a motorcycle taxi, so this was very interesting. Meizhou is a place where people live a simple and good life. The agricultural way of life moved me. My relatives were mostly farmers. They do not have a lot of wealth, but they were very satisfied with their livelihood.
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