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ふたりのゆうじん
みきっこ:わたしはあなたのふくがすきじゃない。いろがはへんです。
(Is みきっこ her first name? If so, I think it's みきこ.)
ひなもり:ばか!はんじゃないです!このいろはにっぽんでにあたらしいスタイルですと!あなたはせんれんされてたはないです!
(Sorry, I couldn't understand はん. Could you write this sentence in English?)
(あたらしいスタイルです→ you can also say あたらしいスタイルですって、スタイルですよ、スタイルなんですよ, etc... between friends.)
みきっこ:ちょっとまって!のみ(?) たすけたいだけ!(I only want to help you.)
(Thinking about these conversation, I think it's a bit more natural to say ちょっと言ってみただけ, but it's only my opinion. )
あなたのふくkはそんなあにわるくないです。。。
ひなもり:もちろん!
Hi Ernesto,
Interesting challenge! This note is very good and we can hear the conversation like this as "girls talk". Please keep up your study about "casual" Japanese.
I hope this was helpful.
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