试作一首七绝平起首句押韵
京城满院尽飞花
牡丹红颜受众夸
蜜味花香能盖世
春虽短暂却繁华
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想起了唐代诗人韩翃的“春城无处不飞花”。春虽短暂却繁华,虽有感叹,但格调乐观。
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刚刚看了你许多文章和诗歌...真心感觉是个非常有才气的姑娘呀...
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Molodets!
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不错啊有QQ吗 加一个 35155537
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“能盖世”有些过于张扬。试试用“满天下”怎么样?
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