REVISED VERSION: MY FAVORITE SONG

My favorite singer, Naoto Inti Raymi, has just released
a new album! Naoto is a Japanese singer/songwriter
who often tours the world. All of his songs make me
happy. :). I think "Adventure" is his best song because
it keeps me amused and makes me feel like I want
to go abroad.

My favorite song

My favorite singer, who Naoto Inti Raymi, has released a new album!!
Naoto Inti Raymi is a Japanese singer and songwrighter.
He often goes on a journey tour around the world. (or: He often travels around the world)
All of his songs make me happy:)
Among them I like "ADVENTURE", which is the best song.
"ADVENTURE" makes me amusing happy and feel like going abroad.