REVISED VERSION: I LOVE MY MOTHER

I love my mother very much. She is a beautiful 46
year old woman with big eyes and long black hair.

I'm not very good in math so my mom, who is very
clever, always helps me in this challenging subject.

Aside from being a good tutor, my mom is also
a good counsellor and she always tells me "Time
is money."

Last but not least, my mom is also a good cook.
After work, she ofen cooks food for me. It is very
delicious!

I love my mother and I hope that my dad and
mom will love each other forever.

I love my mother.

My mother is a 46-year-old woman, and I love her very much.
She is a beautiful woman. She has a big eyes and long black hair.
My mother always says, "Time is money." I have a difficult time with my math,  so she always helps me with it, and she is very clever.
After work, she often cooks food to for me. It's very delicious.
I love my mother. I hope my dad and my mom will love each other forever.

xDDDD