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In globalized society, it is widely believed that technology have an negative impact on society because technology make society hasty and immoral. However, I disagree with this perspective. I firmly believe that technology made our life easier this is because first, technology made our life convenient second, technology relive our stress
First of all, technology allows us to do less work, expend less time and energy and lead easier life. To be specific, today's society have many technological tools and infrastructure that will do our work for us and we can access and utilize these tools and infrastructure for their benefits. For example, when I finish a work with paper and pencil I could finish in four hours so when doing homework I could not enjoy my leisure time but with computer I could finish a work in one hour so I got higher score than before because I could check my assignment over again and again furthermore we are living busy and hectic life saving time means we can do a lot more things later so i would save time by using the latest technology .
All things considered It is my belief that my arguments on this topic has been delivered accurately and effectively with these reason as mentioned above. Never should we forget that this issue may have affect on our future
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