Please, help me with this text

A lot of well-known experts in the field of philosophy of mind, such as David, Ned, and Thomas, are working at the Faculty of Philosophy at the University. Such as David, Ned, Thomas, and others. I have studied their books and ideas. I think it would be great to learn from these (if you mean David, Ned and Thomas, otherwise you can just use "the") scholars, whose books I have read.

You don't need to write ..and others...when you are giving an example although this is a common mistake made by English speakers. 

You write very well and the mistakes are the same that would be made by some English speakers.