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The trip of heart Last week ,our class have a journey in Yangshuo,GuiLin for 4 days to practicing our oral English. l have never given my thought to greet with the foreigner face to face in a rush way. But a friendly face gave me the much brave to have a chat with her. After a brief talking,l knew the couple of lovers,being a backpackers ,come from New Zealand traveled in China. And there are some problems slow down their trip,so they ask help from us to get rid of it. They are in the darkness for the prices from Yangshuo to Yangdi. We strain our every nerve to give the enough assistance.Yet ,they have been discussed the costs with the travel agency. To everyone's surprise,the agency are entirely frown to our behavior and remarked with the exterme sharp word---" lt's none of your business"and "Be careful,we could hurt your girls." Shocked as we were,and we did not know both sides are in accordance with the costs.Although the foreigh friends are absent from the true prices,we can't bargain with them.Finally,we failed to solve their troubles .Regreted,we were in an unsatisfied mood while the couples given a kindly smile and comforted word to relief us.The haste trip as well as bad weather forced the couples to leave away,so they gave us a warm hug and said goodbye with us. Trips are rarely sufficient,while the most impressive scene swallowed up our minds was the amicableness of that foreign friends.Indifference may isolated the strangers,but friendlyness do not and never be!( waiting for the next stetement)

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                                                   The trip of heart

       Last week ,our class have a journey in Yangshuo,GuiLin for 4 days to practicing our oral English.
       l have never given my thought to greet with the foreigner face to face in a rush way. But a friendly face gave me the much brave to have a chat with her. After a brief talking,l knew the couple of lovers,being a backpackers ,come from New Zealand traveled in China. And there are some problems slow down their trip,so they ask help from us to get rid of it.
       They are in the darkness for the prices from Yangshuo to Yangdi. We strain our every nerve to give the enough assistance.Yet ,they have been discussed the costs with the travel agency. To everyone's surprise,the agency are entirely frown to our behavior and remarked with the exterme sharp word---" lt's none of your business"and "Be careful,we could hurt your girls."
       Shocked as we were,and we did not know both sides are in accordance with the costs.Although the foreigh friends are absent from the true prices,we can't bargain with them.Finally,we failed to solve their troubles .Regreted,we were in an unsatisfied mood while the couples given a kindly smile and comforted word to relief us.The haste trip as well as bad weather forced the couples to leave away,so they gave us a warm hug and said goodbye with us.
       Trips are rarely sufficient,while the most impressive scene swallowed up our minds was the amicableness of that foreign friends.Indifference may isolated the strangers,but friendlyness do not and never be!( waiting for the next statement)

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The trip of heart

        Last week ,our class have a journey in Yangshuo,GuiLin for 4 days to practicing our oral English.
        l have never given my thought to greet with the foreigner face to face in a rush way. But a friendly face gave me the much brave to have a chat with her. After a brief talking,l knew the couple of lovers,being a backpackers ,come from New Zealand traveled in China. And there are some problems slow down their trip,so they ask help from us to get rid of it.
        They are in the darkness for the prices from Yangshuo to Yangdi. We strain our every nerve to give the enough assistance.Yet ,they have been discussed the costs with the travel agency. To everyone's surprise,the agency are entirely frown to our behavior and remarked with the exterme sharp word---" lt's none of your business"and "Be careful,we could hurt your girls."
        Shocked as we were,and we did not know both sides are in accordance with the costs.Although the foreigh friends are absent from the true prices,we can't bargain with them.Finally,we failed to solve their troubles .Regreted,we were in an unsatisfied mood while the couples given a kindly smile and comforted word to relief us.The haste trip as well as bad weather forced the couples to leave away,so they gave us a warm hug and said goodbye with us.
        Trips are rarely sufficient,while the most impressive scene swallowed up our minds was the amicableness of that foreign friends.Indifference may isolated the strangers,but friendlyness do not and never be!( waiting for the next stetement)

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