Corrections · 10
今日日记
我今天6点钟起床。在7点半上课(I start classes at 7:30). 我的学校不太近,所以我起床很早。我的同学也起床很早。我吃过早饭,然后我去公共汽车站。公共汽车已经走了。It didn't matter because another one came after 5 minutes.我今天有7课课。今天是一个同学的生日,她给了我们巧克力。
It is good,come on!
今日日记
我今天6点钟起床。在7半上课(I start classes at 7:30). 我的学校不太近。所以我应该起床很早。我的同学也起床很早。我吃完早饭了。然后我就去公共汽车站。公共汽车已经走了。It didn't matter because another one came after 5 minutes.(不过没关系,五分钟之后下一趟就来了)我今天有7节课。今天是一个同学的生日。,她给了我们巧克力。
今日日记
我今天6点钟起床。7点半开始上课(I start classes at 7:30). 我的学校有点远,所以我需要很早就起床。我的同学也起床很早。吃完早饭后,我去公共汽车站。可是车已经走了。不过没关系,5分钟后会有另一班车。It didn't matter because another one came after 5 minutes.我今天有7节课。今天是一个同学的生日。她给了我们巧克力。
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今日日记
我今天6点钟起床。在7半上课(I start classes at 7:30).。 我的学校不太近。,所以我应该起床很早。我的同学也起床很早。我吃早饭了了早饭。,然后我去公共汽车站。,可是公共汽车已经走了。It didn't matter because another one came after 5 minutes.(不过没关系,因为5分钟后有另一班公共汽车。)我今天有7节课。今天是一个同学的生日。,她给了我们巧克力。
good luck.
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