2013-5-12
Today,I havent study, Idont know why I dont want to study at all today, To be honest, I really apreciated those who can study at libarary all day, sometimes we always look down on nerds, but nowdays ,i admired them,not everyone can be such consentreted on one things, especially, it may have done over 10 years,it's very admirable. so, i would try me best to be this kind of people! fighting~~~~~
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2013-5-12
Today, I haven't studied. study, I don't know why, I just don't want to study at all today. To be honest, I really apreciated appreciate those who can study at in the libarary all day. sometimes In the past we always looked down on nerds, but nowdays I admired them. Not everyone can be such consentreted concentrate so well on one things, especially , it may have done over 10 years. It's very admirable. so, I would will try me my best to be this kind of person people! fighting~~~~~
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I wouldn't want to study in the library all day. After awhile, your mind needs a change to the environment, to keep it stimulated. You don't want to become bored. You just need a quiet place to assist you in studying. You don't have to consider yourself as a nerd either.
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2013-5-12
Today,I havent study, Idont know why I dont want to study at all today, To be honest, I really apreciated（appreciated） those who can study at（in the） libarary all day, sometimes we always look down on nerds, but nowdays ,i admired them,not everyone can be such consentreted（concentrateed） on one things（thing）, especially, it may have done over 10 years,it's very admirable. so, i would try me（my） best to be this kind of people! fighting~~~~~
ps：你的短文里用了现在又用了过去时态，文章的时态要统一不能乱用哦，我改的不是很全希望还有专业点的再帮你改改。
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